A Sticky Business

There was a small village with a small church.And the church clock stroke hours day and night. One evening, the clock stopped striking suddently. some villagers climbed into the clock tower to see it, but no one could explain why, because the clock seemed fine.
The vicar climbed into the tower as well. He went thought the clock carefully, suddently, he found that the clock invaded by bees, the gears were filled with full of honey and wax.
A bee keeper was called, he removed the queen bee, and the other bees followed them. Then, villagers clapped with cheers, the clock was cleaned, It was working again at last.
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This is more than a simple correction.   It is more like how an English writer would approach the topic.

In the village was a small church whose clock rang at all hours of the day and night.  However, one day the clock suddenly stopped ringing.  The villagers climbed up the clock tower to investigate but after examination, all were puzzled because the clock seemed perfectly normal.

This prompted the vicar to climb the tower. He examined the clock carefully and then discovered to his great horror that the clock had been invaded by bees and the gears were full of honey and bees.

A beekeeper was called.  He removed the queen bee, then all the other bees followed.  THe villagers clapped and cheered.   THe clock was cleaned and once again, rang clearly throughout the village.

A Sticky Business

There was a small village with a small church.And the church clock stroke hours day and night. One evening, the clock stopped striking suddently. some villagers climbed into the clock tower to see it, but no one could explain why, because the clock seemed fine.
The vicar climbed into the tower as well. He went thought the clock carefully, suddently, he found that the clock invaded by bees, the gears were filled with full of honey and wax.
A bee keeper was called, he removed the queen bee, and the other bees followed them. Then, villagers clapped with cheers, the clock was cleaned, It was working again at last.

this short  stroy tell us two things.
one is don't look down on a little things , detail is a key of succsess.
NO two leader is inportant to a union