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E-mail (to a friend) (FCE) Hi Robin. It was great to hear from you. I will love go to the sports camp with you. So I will do exercise as well while I’m in your country. I would like to play football. Moreover I have just bought new boots for playing. However, I don’t know playing tennis and I haven’t got a racket. I hope I can rent sports equipment in the sport camp. As regards the food, I could cook a pizza. I learnt to do it when I was in Italy the last summer. I know you will love my special pizza called “Sabrosa” when you test it. I would also like to spend a few days in your city before we going to the sport camp, because I want to know your country. I like to see art and to know a little more of the Canada’s history so we could visit a museum, for instance. Hope to hear from you soon. All the best.

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E-mail (to a friend) (FCE)

Hi Robin.

It was great to hear from you. I would love go to the sports camp with you. So I can do some exercise as well, while I’m in your country.

I would like to play football. In fact, I have just bought some brand new football boots. However, I don’t know how to play tennis and I haven’t got a racket. I hope I can rent some sports equipment there.

As regards to the food, I could cook us a pizza. I learnt how to do it when I was in Italy the last summer. I know you will love my special pizza when you try it. It's called a “Sabrosa”.

I would also like to spend a few days in your city before we going to the sports camp, because I want to know more about your country. I would like to see some art and to find out a little more about the Canada’s history, perhaps we could visit a museum, for instance.

Hope to hear from you soon.

All the best.

  

Good work! :)

 

You could write 'I'd' instead of 'I would' to make it more informal. 

Because there are multiple activities at sports camp, it is always plural. 

Any skill e.g. playing an instrument, cooking, writing, swimming etc is always 'I know how...' you can also say 'I can'. So you could say 'I know how to play guitar' or 'I can play guitar' - 'know how' is more formal but you can't say I know playing tennis. 

Because you've mentioned boots after talking about playing football, the fact that the boots are for playiwng is implied. But you can make it clear by saying football boots. 

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E-mail (to a friend) (FCE)

Hi Robin.

It was great to hear from you. I would love to go to the sports camp with you, so I can (makes more sense) do exercise as well while I’m in your country.

I would like to play football. Moreover I have just bought new boots for playing. However, I don’t know how to play tennis and I haven’t got a racket. I hope I can rent sports equipment in the sports camp.

Regarding the food, I could cook a pizza. I learnt to do it when I was in Italy the last summer. I think you will love my special pizza called “Sabrosa” when you try it.

I would also like to spend a few days in your city before we go to the sports camp, because I want to get to know your country. I would like to see art and to know a little more of the Canada’s history, so we could visit a museum, for instance.

Hope to hear from you soon.

All the best.

 

 

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