By Subway

When I first travelled on the by subway in Shanghai, I noticed that found people around me looked tired、pressured and numb., They didn't have any expression mood on their faces and were in a hurry. just hurried to do something ,I thought was it's strange and were did not understanded. After 2 years lived living in Shanghai, I have became the one of them. Every morning, I hurry to go to work and never show my emotions, have any mood on the face,all I think of is not being late for the work and working hardworking. Everyday is the in a same way,  I know I never want to be the one who looks numb and tired, but I have already changed.

By Taking the subway

when I first by took the subway in Shanghai,iI found people around me looked tired、pressure stressed (or "under pressure", "pressure" is a noun) and numb,. (use period after a complete sentence) they They didn't have mood emotions on the face and just hurried to do something ,. I thought it's was strange and were did not understanded.After 2 years lived living in shanghai, I became the one of them. Every morning,I hurry to go to work and never have any mood emotion/ expression on the face,.all All I think is not to be late for the work and hardworking to work hard. Everyday is in a the same way (I would say "Everyday is the same" ),. but I know I never want wanted to be the one who looks numb and tired, but I have already changed.