Takoyaki Party

I had a takoyaki party this week. After work, and after my colleagues and I went to the supermarket to buy food, we got together at one of my colleague's apartment and made takoyaki. It is made from wheat flour, water and eggs. It is shaped like a golf ball. We use a takoyaki-pan to make it. It contains octopus ('tako' in Japanese), pickled ginger, tempura scraps, green onion, and so on. You can put anything you want into it- even chocolate is OK. We put mentaiko (seasoned cod roe) and cheese into ours. It was yummy. We also watched Girls' Generation live on DVD, which is a Korean female idol group, because my colleagues are huge fans of them. I had very fun time that day.

On the whole, this is quite good! Just remember there's always a space between a word and a bracket (like this).