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how I tried to wake up early during 3 month So I red a lot of book about healthy life style and also heard many rumors about it. If you have ever tried to knowing something about healthy life style you should know that all authors tell us about three things sleeping eating and physical activates. I love to do experiments which can help me to discover something new and give me experience to understand what is good for me and work and what is not good and does not work. In 2013 January I decided to try do that. It was amazing! My day was much longer then before and I felt that I have a very long day and a lot of time I did not even know how to spend it. But after few days I started my new life style I felt that want to sleep at lunch time. But anyway I wanted to see what will happened that’s why I did not give it up in the beginning. And in the end I felt so tired and after it have slept for two weeks 12 hours every single day. Ha-ha. It did not work for me. I can’t sleep for a 6 houses a day. I need 8 or 9. It was my experience. Hope you enjoy this story.

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how I tried to wake up early during the last 3 months

 

First I read a lot of books about adopting a healthy life style because I had heard many rumors about it.

 

If you have ever tried to learn something about adopting a healthy life style, you should know that many authors mention the same three things: sleeping, eating and physical activities.

 

I love to undertake experiments which can help me to learn something new and give me experience and that helps me to understand what is good for me, what works, what is not good for me and what does not work.

 

In January 2103, I decided to try do that. It was amazing!

 

My day was much longer then previously and I felt I had so much time, I did not even know how to spend it. A  few days after I started my new life style, I felt that I did not want to sleep at lunch time.

Anyway, I wanted to see what might happen if I changed my life style and that’s why I did not give it up at the beginning.

 

By the end though, I felt so tired that for the next two weeks, I slept for 12 hours every single day.

 

Ha-ha. It did not work for me. I can’t sleep for only 6 hours a day. I need 8 or 9.

 

That was my experience.

 

I hope you enjoyed this story.

 

[The word 'read' sounds the same in the present and past tenses so 'I read' is said as 'I red' when it is in the past tense. 

 

Don't start a sentence with the word 'but'. It actually joins two sentences together when you want to compare two different things like 'dogs are loyal but cats are not'.

 

Your story was very good. Keep practising!]

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U can wake up early and also sleep enough 8 hours per day Alex :p Go to sleep at 10pm and wake up at 6am!!! Healthy lifestyle:p

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