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Changeable Weather Of Germany
The temperature in Germany reached over 37 degrees at one point last weekend. However, it became much cooler over the past 4 days but I heard that it is going to be hot again this weekend! How changeable German weather is! I am not used to it and I can't become used to it. It is very surprising to me as it changes so often. It is not very common in Korea I would say. My German friends told me that Germany has a mild summer. I was really dying from the heat last weekend.
The most interesting thing I have ever seen in Germany was one day it was raining, snowing, sleeting and then sunny at the same time. I was thinking "how is this possible? but I still love German weather even though it changes so much. The summer in Germany is obviously not as hot as a Korean one and winter is not as cold as Korean one.
[Very well written. Be care of your use of prepositions like 'on' or 'to'. The word 'but' does not start a sentence but joins two sentences together. You do not use a comma after the word 'but'.]
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