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The Invisible Enemy's Back Cover Close to Fedora, a terrifying forest shelters beasts. Protectors of their place. Farmers and notables imagine demons, darkness and spells. A strange event will reinforce the Fedoriens concerns. On the other side of the mountain, the fire reigns. The invisible enemy will take you on a thrilling quest for truth. Questions. Uncertainties. Discoveries. Halfway between realism and fantasy, embark with soldiers, priests and scholars in a world neither completely ours, nor quite another. Between sciences and magic, what will you believe? Between reason and beliefs, what will you choose?

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Agree with Theresa's corrections, and added a couple of possesive corrections.

 

The Invisible Enemy's Back Cover

 

Close to Fedora, a terrifying forest shelters beasts. Protectors of their place. Farmers and notables imagine demons, darkness and spells. A strange event will reinforce the Fedoriens' concerns. On the other side of the mountain, the fire reigns.

The invisible enemy will take you on a thrilling quest for truth. Questions. Uncertainties. Discoveries. Halfway between realism and fantasy, embark with soldiers, priests and scholars in a world (that is) neither completely ours, nor quite another's.

Between sciences and magic, what which will you believe?
Between reason and beliefs, what which will you choose?

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The Invisible Enemy's Back Cover

Close to Fedora, a terrifying forest shelters beasts. Protectors of their place. Farmers and notables imagine demons, darkness and spells. A strange event will reinforce the Fedoriens concerns. On the other side of the mountain, the fire reigns.

The invisible enemy will take you on a thrilling quest for truth. Questions. Uncertainties. Discoveries. Halfway between realism and fantasy, embark with soldiers, priests and scholars in a world neither completely ours, nor quite another.

Between sciences and magic, what will you believe?
Between reason and beliefs, what will you choose?

 

Close to Fedora, a terrifying forest shelters beasts who are the protectors of this place. OR

Close to Fedora, a terrifying forest shelters beasts. The beasts are the protectors of this realm.

 

Between science and magic, which will you believe?

Between reason and belief, which will you choose?

 

I would like to read more! I like your style. Your writing draws me into the story. Thanks!

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The Invisible Enemy's Back Cover

 

Close to Fedora, a terrifying forest shelters beasts. They are protectors of their place /home. Farmers and notables/ aristocrats imagine demons, darkness and spells. A strange event will reinforce the Fedoriens' concerns. On the other side of the mountain, (the) fire reigns.

The invisible enemy will take you on a thrilling quest for truth. Questions. Uncertainties. Discoveries. Halfway between realism and fantasy, embark with soldiers, priests and scholars into a world neither completely ours, nor quite another/ anyone else's.

Between sciences and magic, what will you believe?
Between reason and beliefs, what will you choose?

 

Very nice :-) 

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Thanks to read! :)
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That is pretty nice Marie. Well done. I also could not really find anything to correct. It looks perfect to me.

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