Jack
Bye bye England I was born in England. I was three years old when we came to Turkey
3 ส.ค. 2015 เวลา 12:51
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Bye bye England

I was born in England. I was three years old when we came to Turkey

 

Excellent! The thing I would try to correct is, when talking to someone (or something as if it was someone) put in a comma between the statement and their name. For example:

 

Very good, Jack.

Many people in England don't know this. Probably because they are too busy clubbing, I suspect. :o

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