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The government wants to keep primary schools open all year round The government wants to keep primary schools open all year round so working parents can combine childcare and work. You decide to write an article for the parents’ association magazine stating your opinion. Cost. Effectiveness. Impact on adults. Impact on children. Recently we have known that government has set up a new law that allows primary schools to keep their doors opened all year round to enable parents to combine childcare and work. I feel that it is compulsory to take time to think seriously about this new situation. First of all we have to think about the kind of society we want to build. Which values we want to be on the basis of our future society. These thoughts will helps us to decide how useful the measures will be. On my personal opinion, I think that for both parents and children the need of a relationship, of a leisure time to share, of a changing rythms are at all costs. Efectiveness will be warrantied at a very first moment but will not be longer. I want persons in my future able to feel, to live, to experiende differents loves, relations, sensations, that will encourage them to work and carry out projects in their live not only in their working life. I want parents enjoying and sharing moments with their kids. I personally think these measures are in the wrong direction. We should think about providing more facilities in the reducing working time sense.

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The government wants to keep primary schools open all year round

The government wants to keep primary schools open all year round so working parents
can combine childcare and work. You decide to write an article for the parents’
association magazine stating your opinion.
Cost.
Effectiveness.
Impact on adults.
Impact on children.

Recently we have received the news that government has set up a new law that allows primary schools to keep their doors opened all year round to enable parents to combine childcare and work.
I feel that it is necessary to take time to think seriously about this new situation.
First of all we have to think about the kind of society we want to build. Which values do we want to be on the basis of our future society. These thoughts will help us to decide how useful the measures will be.
In my personal opinion, I think that for both parents and children the need of a relationship, of a leisure time to share, of a changing rhythms are at all come with costs.
Efectiveness will be warranted at a very beginning, but not in the long term.
I want persons in my future able to feel, to live, to experience differents loves, relations, sensations, that will encourage them to work and carry out projects in their lives, not only in their working life.
I want parents enjoying and sharing moments with their kids.
I personally think these measures are moving in the wrong direction. We should think about providing more facilities with regard to  in the reducing working time sense.

 

[Very good.  'Compulsory' was technically correct, but 'necessary' was a better fit.]

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