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勇晴的日记 今天我七点钟起床了。太早了。。我不常那么早从床上爬起来,但是我今天又一门开车的课。我刚两月一前开始愿望个车照。我觉得又知道怎么开车又有车照的人都生活过的比没有车照的人更方便。所以我决定了自己要开始学怎么开车。 本来开车的时候我紧张极了!那时候开车对我来说有点别扭,也有点奇怪。 怎么把车前开或者后开我都不知道。现在我越来越开车更自信。 我今天终于自己开始更大大方方地开车。我也比以前更享受开车。 在这种情况下我肯定需要成为个勤劳的工人, 以便我那么快会买一辆车。。 :) Today I woke up ad 7am. So early... I don't crowl from my bed as early that often, (that is said this way to show my reluctance to waking up early) but I had my driving lesson again today. It was two months ago, when I begin to crave want a driving licence. I believe that lifes of people who can drive and have a car are much more convenient from the ones that don't have this abilities. So I decided I want to learn how to drive a car myself. At first I was really nervous when driving a car. At that time I thought that driving is a bit awkward and weird. I didn't know how to move my car to the front or to the back. Right now I'm slowly beginning to drive in a more confident way. Today 've I finally started to drive more calmly ( and confidently). I also enjoy driving a car more( compared to what I used to think abot driving before). In this case I definitely need to change into a dilligent worker, so that I can buy a car of my own really fast.

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勇晴的日记

今天我七点钟起床了。 ,太早了。。  ……我不常从来也不那么早从床上爬起来,但是我今天又一门开车的课又要开始学开车了。

“不常”听上去像not often,听上去没有那么不情愿。但如果说“从来也不”,听上去就能感觉到你特别不想起床了。这里也不是说以前一次都没有,是一种比较夸张的说法,用来强调。

“又一门开车的课”听上去像之前已经开了一门了,好像学驾照要学好多门课程(我不知道是不真是学了好多课程啊?如果是的话,可以改成“又开了一门考驾照的课”),如果只是又开始考驾照了,就像我改的那么说就行。



我刚两月一前开始愿望个车照  两个月前,我开始特别想考驾照。我觉得又知道怎么开车又有车照会开车又有驾照的人都生活过的比没有车照的人更方便。所以我决定了自己要开始学怎么开车。


本来开车的时候我紧张极了!那时候开车对我来说有点别扭,也有点奇怪。 我都不知道怎么把车向前开或者向后开我都不知道。现在我开车越来越开车更自信了。

“更”和“越来越”是一个意思,用一个就不用另一个啦。


我今天终于可以自己开始更大大方方地开车了。我也比以前更享受开车。
在这种情况下我肯定需要成为个勤劳的工人(我肯定要努力工作), 以便我会很那么快会买一辆车。。 :)

 



Today I woke up ad 7am. So early... I don't crowl from my bed as early that often, (that is said this way to show my reluctance to waking up early) but I had my driving lesson again today. It was two months ago, when I begin to crave want a driving licence. I believe that lifes of people who can drive and have a car are much more convenient from the ones that don't have this abilities. So I decided I want to learn how to drive a car myself. At first I was really nervous when driving a car. At that time I thought that driving is a bit awkward and weird. I didn't know how to move my car to the front or to the back. Right now I'm slowly beginning to drive in a more confident way. Today 've I finally started to drive more calmly ( and confidently). I also enjoy driving a car more( compared to what I used to think abot driving before). In this case I definitely need to change into a dilligent worker, so that I can buy a car of my own really fast.

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勇晴的日记

今天我七点钟就起床了。太早了.....我不常那么早从床上爬起来,但是我今天有一门驾校的课。

我两个月以前开始打算考取个驾照。

我觉得有驾照的人又知道怎么开车的人生活都过得比没有驾照的人更方便。

所以我决定自己要开始学怎么开车。

本来开车的时候我紧张极了!那时候开车对我来说有点别扭。也有点奇怪。

怎么把车前往开或者后往开我都不知道。

现在我开车越来越自信。

我今天终于自己开始大大方方地开车。

我也比以前享受开车。

在这种情况下我肯定需要成为个勤劳的人,以便我可以更早的买一辆车。


Today I woke up ad 7am. So early... I don't crowl from my bed as early that often, (that is said this way to show my reluctance to waking up early) but I had my driving lesson again today. It was two months ago, when I begin to crave want a driving licence. I believe that lifes of people who can drive and have a car are much more convenient from the ones that don't have this abilities. So I decided I want to learn how to drive a car myself. At first I was really nervous when driving a car. At that time I thought that driving is a bit awkward and weird. I didn't know how to move my car to the front or to the back. Right now I'm slowly beginning to drive in a more confident way. Today 've I finally started to drive more calmly ( and confidently). I also enjoy driving a car more( compared to what I used to think abot driving before). In this case I definitely need to change into a dilligent worker, so that I can buy a car of my own really fast.

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It's so nice of you providing a English version. I can learn some sentences from it too.
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写的不错啊。我到现在还不会开车啊。。。

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