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Why I am doing this Well, to start with I should tell you something about me. I was born in Germany, Hamburg and I am still living there. My future is still unclear, but one thing I know for sure: I want out! Not that Germany isn't nice, I just love English and I would love to live in a country that mainly speaks English. Right now I am in the middle of finding the perfect job for me. Yes, I am still in school but in a year I have to decide what I want to study and right now I am clueless. Of course, I have a dream, a dream of becoming a famous film director such as Peter Jackson or Tim Burton. But the reality is, that I don't have the money to go to a college in America, I don't have the connections or social status to realize my dreams. And because I don't wanna get stuck in a local production of some awful soap opera, I decided that I need something realistic. And now I am here writing this entry instead of googling ways to find the perfect job for me.

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Why I am doing this

Well, to start with I should tell you something about myself. I was born in Germany, Hamburg and I am still living there. My future is still unclear, but one thing I know for sure: I want out! Not that Germany isn't nice, I just love English and I would love to live in a country that mainly speaks English. Right now I am in the middle of finding the perfect job for me. Yes, I am still in school but in a year I have to decide what I want to study and right now I am clueless. Of course, I have a dream, a dream of becoming a famous film director such as Peter Jackson or Tim Burton. But the reality is, that I don't have the money to go to a college in America, I don't have the connections or social status to realize my dreams. And because I don't want to be stuck in a local production of some awful soap opera, I decided that I need something realistic. And now I am here writing this entry instead of googling ways to find the perfect job for me.

 

I hope you find a good way to accomplish your dreams. Let me know if you'd be interested in a language exchange!

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"Aim For The Stars, If You Fail, You'll Land On The Moon."
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My dear you are too young and pretty to be burdened by your thoughts. When I saw the responses to your post simply correcting your grammar but not responding to what you said it made me laugh but also feel really bad for you at the same time! Stay positive and don't stop dreaming! Dreams can come true.
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Why I am doing this?

Well, to start with, I should tell you something about myself. I was born in Germany, Hamburg, Germany and I am still living there. My future is still unclear, but one thing I know for sure: I want out! Not that Germany isn't nice, I just love English and I would love to live in a country that mainly speaks English. Right now I am in the middle of finding the perfect job for myself. Yes, I am still in school, but, in a year, I have to decide what I want to study and right now I am clueless. Of course, I have a dream, a dream of becoming a famous film director such as Peter Jackson or Tim Burton. However, the reality is that I don't have the money to go to a college in America; I don't have the connections or social status to realize my dreams. And Because I don't want to get stuck in a local production of some awful soap opera, I decided that I need something realistic. And Now I am here writing this entry instead of googling ways to find the perfect job for myself.

 

One usually does not start a sentence with conjunctions such as "and" or "but".  You are correct that universities in the United States are becoming more and more expensive.  It is a big problem here which is discussed in the newspapers now and then.  College tuition has risen much faster than inflation.

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