AndyCan
my motocycle I have a motocycle, and when I graduate from high school, I drive my moto to my college when I moved to the college dorm, and I always drove my moto to go home, it cost me one point five hour, and I always drove under the bridge that the bridge is next to riverside, and I can see the view, big road, some race car on the way, and I drove this way already three years, so I saw the different view in every season, and sometimes I drove in the typhoon day as well, it was a very memorable experience. Remark: I don’t know which is better between this “I always drove my moto to go home” and “I always go home by driving the moto”. And the one point five hour I don’t want to write into 1.5 h, because I want practice my pronunciation, but I don’t know it current or not.
30 ส.ค. 2015 เวลา 5:04
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My Motorcycle

I have a motorcycle, and when I graduated from high school, I drove my moto bike to my college when I moved to the college dorm. and I always rode back home.  It took one and a half hours drove my moto to go home, it cost me one point five hour, and I always drove under the bridge that the bridge is next to the riverside, and I could can see the view, the big road, and  some fast race cars on the way. and I have driven this route  for drove this way already three years, so I saw the different views in every season, and sometimes I drove in the typhoon day as well, it was a very memorable experience.

Remark:
I don’t know which is better between this “I always drove my moto to go home” and “I always go home by driving the moto”.

And the one point five hour I don’t want to write into 1.5 h, because I want practice my pronunciation, but I don’t know it current or not.  See my corrections.

30 สิงหาคม 2015
oh, yes, that's my mistake, thank you
30 สิงหาคม 2015
motocycle maybe is motorcycle?
30 สิงหาคม 2015
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