Hiroya
My typical Saturday I was drinking till morning yesterday, I got up at 12:00. Then, I did house work such as dishes, laundry, clean my room. After that, I did exercise. Then, I made a dinner. Finally, I started studying English right now. It will be rain tomorrow. I was suppose to be going fishing if weather is good. If I could not, I swear that I will study English and programing stuff !
5 ก.ย. 2015 เวลา 12:02
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My typical Saturday

I was drinking till morning yesterday, I got up at 12:00. Then, I did housework such as dishes, laundry, clean my room. After that, I did (some) exercise. Then, I made a dinner. Finally, I started studying English until now. It will be raining tomorrow. I was supposed to go fishing if the weather was good. If I cannot go, I swear that I will study English and programing stuff !

 

Nice work! English tense is sometimes tricky, as you can use the present to talk about the future.

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