MY ACTIVITY DURING HOLIDAY

In this opportunity,l would like to tell you about my activity during holiday.

With this opportunity given to me , I would like to tell you about what I did during my holidays.

for the first time l went to my hometown in baganbatu.so,l got some project when l arrived there.
the first,promise to my self! i want to help all of my mother jobs.such as washing,cooking,sweeping,ironing,and atc.

I went back to my hometown of Baganbatu for the first time  and soon after my arrival, I had some things in mind to do ; firstly,as I had promised myself, to help my mother out with all her tasks like washing,cooking,sweeping ,ironing,etc.

 The second project,i want to help my brothers and my cousin to know about english grammar.so,l became a teacher to teach them until they knew about english.

Secondly, I wanted to help my brothers and my cousin to learn English grammer . So, I became their teacher and I would teach until their English improved.

But,it was not easy to teach them.They always say about english was bored and did not like to study english.(After that,l only done their exercise and asked to them why it became like this.????)

But, it was not easy to teach them . They always said learning English was boring and did not like to study it. Later . I just did some English exercises with them , and I also asked them why they felt about English this way.

l was so happy when my brothers had  good marks . It  gave them motivation to study hard.

WHAT I DID DURING MY HOLIDAY

l would like to take this opportunity to tell you about my holiday.
First l went to my hometown in Baganbatu.  l started a project when l arrived there.
First, I made a promise to myself!  I wanted to help do my mother's chores, such as washing, cooking, sweeping, ironing, etc.
The second project was to help my brothers and my cousin learn English grammar.  To do that, l became a teacher to teach them until they knew about English.  But it was not easy to teach them.  They always said English was boring, and they did not like to study English.  After that, l only did their exercise and asked them why it was like this.  l am so happy because my brother got a good mark.  I had motivated him to study hard.

[Good work; I have made some corrections.  Where I was not certain, I guessed at what you might have wanted to say.  Good for you for teaching your family English.  I am glad you do not think it is boring!]