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One day in my life
I wake up at six and thirty in the morning hour of morning.
I prepare to go my job.
I work since from eight o'clock to one o'clockthirteen hours.
When I finished my work, I accompany to my friend to take the bus. It's funny, we talk about everything, about what we think or we do more latter in only fifteen minutes, haha.
I wear my sunglasses and walk to regrets my home.
I like to walk to regrets my home because it's still early and I listen to music on my cellphone.
When I arrive to my home I eat lunch with my family, talk togheter and watch some TV.
More latter, I prepare to go my university. In the night I study law at the national university of my country.
I like to go at university, because I'm very happy learning and talking with my friends.
Muy bien!
One day in my life
I wake up at six and thirty in the morning.
I prepare get ready to go to my job.
I work since from eight o'clock in the morning to thirteen hours. 1 pm.
When I have finished my work, I accompany to my friend to and we take the bus together. It's funny, we talk about everything, about we think or we do more latter in only fifteen minutes, haha.
I wear my sunglasses and walk to regrets my home.
I like to walk to regrets my home because it's still early and I listen to music on my cellphone.
When I arrive to my home I have lunch with my family, we talk together and watch some TV.
Later, I prepare get ready to go to my university. In the At night I study law at the national university of my country.
I like to go to the university, because I'm very happy I enjoy learning and talking with my friends.
Buen Hecho! Sigue así!
I understood all of it. I only corrected grammar. Very well done. I was not sure what you were trying to say using the word regrets.
Shari
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