Iggy
Today's morning Today's morning I had finished my medical duty then I returned to my house. It wasn't a difficult duty, and I could sleep four hours. When I had returned to my house I looked a authentic movie about the english grammar. It was always useful. In general it was a busy and good day.
4 ต.ค. 2015 เวลา 17:24
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This morning

This morning I had finished my medical duty then I returned to my house. It wasn't a difficult duty, and I could sleep for four hours. When I returned to my house I watched an authentic movie about English grammar. It was always useful. In general it was a busy but good day.

 

Hello Iggy,

 

Just a few small problems, you can 'look at' a movie but 'watched' is better as it implies more focus on the movie.

 

Hope this helps

 

Bob

4 ตุลาคม 2015

This Morning

This morning, I finished my medical duty; then, I returned to my house. It wasn't a difficult day, and I could then sleep for hours. At home, I watched an authentic movie about English grammar. It was very useful. Over all, it was a busy, good day.

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