Наталья
About my terrible cold I hate to be sick.To be honest I rarely fall ill fortunately because I take vitamins and like sport. But now cough, runny nose and temperature happened to me. Just imagine... It's snow in Moscow today! Look at the view from my window.
9 ต.ค. 2015 เวลา 20:36
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About my terrible cold.

I hate to be sick. To be honest I rarely fall ill, fortunately, because I take vitamins and I like sport. But now I have a cough, runny nose and temperature happened to me.
Just imagine... It's snowing in Moscow today! Look at the view from my window.

 

Наталья, it is not good to use both "To be honest" and "Fortunately" better to use either one or the other.

"To be honest, I rarely fall ill, because I take vitamins and I like sport."

"Fortunately, I rarely fall ill because I take vitamins and I like sport."

or "Fortunately, because I take vitamins and enjoy sports, I rarely fall ill."

I don't need to imagine the snow in Moscow, I saw it myself on Thursday when I was leaving!

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