Mail template for looking for an apartment

Hi, I'm Mana(m), from Japan. I've seen your advertisement.
Is the room still available? I was wondering when would be a good time to come see it.

My profile
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I'm a student and go to school in downtown. I'm staying for a year in xxx and I'm also thinking of applying for a job after graduation. If I get a job, I would keep living here. Now, I have enough money to stay for a year.
For my personality, I'm a quiet and responsible person. I'm keen on keeping a the room clean and tidy. My hobbies are listening to music, reading books and manga, playing darts and traveling.

Thank you.