My Family

MY FAMILY

Hello, I´m going to introduce you to my family. We are a Spanish family. We live in Madrid, it is a nice city.
My name´s Maria. I´m 25 years old . I work as a teacher. I´m single and I live with my parents and two brothers.
My mother´s name is Ana. She is fifty years old and is very good and hardworking. Before she goes to work, she does housework and she prepares breakfast for the family. Apart from this ,she is a nurse at the same hospital where my father works. My father is Manuel, he´s fifty seven. He is also a good father and doctor. They met at work.
I also have two younger brothers. They are Fran , he is 15 years old and Dani, he´s ten. They are very lovely and funny.
The brother in law´s mother is the only brother of my father. His name is David. He is seventy five. In the evenings, he helps us with the children when my parents work (or 'while my parents work'). Sometimes also he brings my cousins Juan and Pablo so they can play with my brothers.
On a weekday my family gets up at 7.00 a.m, we have breakfast and go to work about nine o´clock.
I work in the school where my brothers study (which is ?)why they come to me each morning. After the classes, at about half past two, we always meet my parents for lunch in a restaurant.
In the evenings I correct exercises and then read some book ('do some reading' or 'read a book for a while' sound better). Sometimes I take a walk or go to the gym while my parents go to the shopping and some evenings I return to work.

Muy bien Mercedes. Concéntrese en el uso de las comas. A veces las usa cuando no las necesita y otras veces se las faltan (como antes de 'while').