introduce myself .is this good?

good evening ,everyone! this is my introduction (BETTER: I would like to introduce myself)! My full name is Lê Hoàng Tuấn , but you can call me Tuấn! I'm nineteen years old!I'm from Ha Noi! I love it here! Now,i'm a first year student at Ha Noi university of science and technology !My major is information technology! I spend almost all of my time studying and doing exercise (doing exercise means sports, maybe you mean "doing homework", "practicing", something like that...) in class ! when i finish my homework, I love reading science books ! I also like listening to music ! Michael Jackson is my favorite singer! he is also a great/wonderful dancer ! Sometimes, i would like to watch pop (?) dance video ! I find it very facinating (OR: I think it is very fascinating)! sometimes,i enjoy looking at masterpieces of the world! My (future) goal is to be an excellent computer programer! however, when at university, i want to be a jim-dandy (<- not a common word) student ,and master english and japanese !I'm want to make friends with anyone who speaks English! I can teach them Vietnamese. OK ! I hope you know more about me more ! I'm very happy to make friends with you! If you think my introdution is interesting or need to ask me something, please give me a THUMPS UP and comment! Oh,my goodness, i feel so tired from typing so much!

Hi Tuan, good intro! Remember that in English we start each sentence with a capital letter :)