Travel to Cuba Hello everybody! My name's Priscila and I want to tell you about my next travel: Cuba. I'll be there in a few weeks, and I think it will be a wonderful experience. I've never travelled

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Travel to Cuba Hello everybody! My name's Priscila and I want to tell you about my next travel: Cuba. I'll be there in a few weeks, and I think it will be a wonderful experience. I've never travelled so far, it will be the first time I'll cross the Athlantic Ocean! There are a lot of hours in the plane, about 10, so I have to think about some things to do to entertain. I can't wait for the moment! I'm very excited.

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Travel My Trip to Cuba (travel is often used as a verb. You can use "trip" or "journey" because they are the nouns of traveling)

Hello everybody!

My name's is ("is" is frequently contracted to "it" as in "it's". Using the contraction the way you did indicates a very informal and almost slang manner of speech)Priscila and I want to tell you about my next travel trip: Cuba. I'll be there in a few weeks, and I think it will be a wonderful experience. I've never travelled traveledso far,. It will be the first time I'll cross the Athlantic Ocean! There are a lot of hours in the plane, about 10, so I have to think about some things to do to entertain. Here are two options to write this sentence to flow more natural: "I will spend a lot of hours on the plan, about 10, so I have to think of things to do to entertain myself." Or "There will be many hours spent on the plane, about 10, so I have to think of things to do for entertainment."

I can't wait for the this moment! I'm very excited.

Great job Priscilla! I hope my corrections will help you!

Travel to Cuba

Hello everybody!

My name's is Priscila and I want to tell you about my next journey travel: Cuba. I'll I will be there in a few weeks, and I think it will be a wonderful experience. I've I have never travelled as so far, and it will be the my first time I'll to cross the Athlantic Ocean! There are a lot of will be many hours in the plane, about 10, so I have to think about some things I can to do for entertainment. to entertain.

I can't wait for the moment! I'm very excited.

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