Dog Waits Two Weeks in a Balcony For Its Owner That Was Murdered
I was reading the news when I realize an interesting article: A dog was waiting in a balcony two weeks for its owner who was murdered in Houston, a state of Texas, in USA. The man was called Hatem Abdu Harbid and he was 54 years.
The neighbors were affected because of the dog's reaction which was still waiting for its owner for more than two weeks. Because of that, they were giving food and water to the dog daily. In the end, the brother's victim has adopted the dog.
This is great because that type of behavior show us how loyal the animals are with us. Generally, that animals only wait for food and love and are always willing to give love and happiness in exchange. It also shows that animals have a pure heart and are very nice the majority of the time.
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Dog Waits Two Weeks in a Balcony For Its Owner That Was Murdered
I was reading the news when I saw an interesting article: A dog was waiting on a balcony two weeks for its owner who was murdered in Houston, the state of Texas, in the USA. The man was called Hatem Abdu Harbid and he was 54 years. ('The man was called...' is ok but it's more common to say 'The man's name was...')The neighbors were affected because of the dog's reaction which was still waiting for its owner for more than two weeks. Because of that, they were giving food and water to the dog daily. In the end, the brother's victim has adopted the dog.
This is great because that type of behavior shows us how loyal the animals are with us. Generally, that animals only wait for food and love, but they are always willing to give love and happiness in exchange. It also shows that animals have a pure heart and are very nice the majority of the time.
Hi, good writing. In the part above in blue, 'The neighbors were affected because of the dog's reaction...' this is understandable. However, it would be more natural to say, "The neighbors noticed the dog because of its behavior..."
Also, in the second sentence of the last paragraph, I didn't fully understand it, so I made changes from what I thought you wanted to say. If you meant something different, can you write the sentence again in another way? - Jason
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