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My passion My passion is doing sport I do sport since 10 years ago. Now, I study nutrition in my free time. I had a basical knowledge but step by step I learned more concepts. For example, there are three types of bodies (ectomorfo, metomorfo and endomorfo). This depends of your genetics. 1) Ectomorfo is a person very thin. They can eat all type of foods but specially hydrates. They must increase your volume body. 2) Metomorfo is a person very strong. They have a perfect body, athletic. It's fantastical dream. 3) Endomorfo is a person very fat. They have a form of pear, many fat in your abdomen. They must decrease your volume body with protein and vegetables. Hydrates is tabboo Nobody is a type specific. We are a convination of some types.
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My passion

My passion is doing sport

My passion is sports (<= "sports" is a collective noun, it takes a singular verb)

I do sport since 10 years ago.

I started doing sports 10 years ago.

I have been doing sports for the past 10 years.

 

Now, I study nutrition in my free time. I had a basical knowledge but step by step I learned more concepts.

Now I study nutrition in my free time. I had some basic knowledge, but gradually I'm learning more.

I study nutrition in my free time. I had some basic knowledge before, but now I'm learning more, bit by bit.


For example, there are three types of bodies (ectomorfo, metomorfo and endomorfo). This depends of your genetics.

For example, there are three types of bodies: ectomorph, mesomorph, and endomorph, depending on one's genes.

1) Ectomorfo is a person very thin. They can eat all type of foods but specially hydrates. They must increase your volume body.
1) Ectomorphs are very thin. They can eat any kind of food but specially carbohydrates. They must increase the volume of their bodies.


2) Metomorfo is a person very strong. They have a perfect body, athletic. It's fantastical dream.
2) Mesomorphs are very strong. They have a perfect, athletic bodies. It's a fantastic dream.


3) Endomorfo is a person very fat. They have a form of pear, many fat in your abdomen. They must decrease your volume body with protein and vegetables. Hydrates is tabboo
3) Endomorphs are overweight. Their bodies are pear-shaped, with fat around the abdomen.

 

They must decrease your volume body with protein and vegetables. Hydrates is tabboo

They need to decrease their body volume by eating protein and vegetables. Carbohydrates (or: carbs) are taboo (or: forbidden).


Nobody is a type specific. We are a convination of some types.

No one is type-specific; each of us is a combination of more than one body type.

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My passion

My passion is doing sport

I do sport since 10 years ago. Now, I study nutrition in my free time. I had a basical knowledge but step by step I learned more concepts.
For example, there are three types of bodies (ectomorfo, metomorfo and endomorfo). This depends of your genetics.

1) Ectomorfo is a person very thin. They can eat all type of foods but specially hydrates. They must increase your volume body.

2) Metomorfo is a person very strong. They have a perfect body, athletic. It's fantastical dream.

3) Endomorfo is a person very fat. They have a form of pear, many fat in your abdomen. They must decrease your volume body with protein and vegetables. Hydrates is tabboo

Nobody is a type specific. We are a convination of some types.

"I do sports since 10 years ago" - Debes decir: "I have been doing sport for ten years" - puedes  usar present perfect continuous para decir, que has empezado hacer deporte hace diez años y sigues hacerlo ahora :) o: "I started doing sport ten years ago" - solo que has empezado hace diez años. 

"I had a basical knowledge" - It should be: "I had basic knowledge". La palabra "knowledge" es incontable, por eso no puedes usar "a".

"but specially hydrates" -  no sé, que quería decir, pero "hydrates" es verbo (él/ ella hidrata) 

"they must increase your..." - "they must increase THEIR". Si "they", debe ser "their" (sus) :) 

"many fat in your" - el mismo que arriba - si "they" - "their", no "your"; y: no "many", pero "much", porqué "fat" es incontable y usamos "much" para incontables 

"hydrates is tabboo" - no sé qué queria decir, pero de nuevo: "hydrates" es el verbo. 

"a type specific" - "a specific type" :) es differente que en espanol 

"convination" - "combination". 

Todo :) Es bien en general. Lo siento si hay errores en mi español, no soy española. 

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My passion

My passion is <strike>doing</strike> [you can say 'playing sport' or just 'sport'. We don't say 'doing sport'.] sport

I <strike>do</strike> have been playing sport <strike>since</strike> for 10 years <strike>ago</strike>. Now, I study nutrition in my free time. I had a basic<strike>al</strike> knowledge at first, but step by step I <strike>learned</strike> am learning more concepts.
For example, there are three types of bodies (ectomorfo, metomorfo and endomorfo). This depends of your genetics.

1) Ectomorfo is a very thin person<strike> very thin</strike>. They can eat all type of foods <strike>but</strike> especially carbohydrates. They must increase <strike>your</strike>  their body's volume <strike>body</strike>.[or size]

2) Metomorfo is a very strong person <strike>very strong</strike>. They have a perfect body, athletic. It's a fantastic<strike>al</strike> dream.

3) Endomorfo is a very fat person <strike>very fat</strike>. They have a pear shape <strike>form of pear</strike>, <strike>many fat in your</strike> their abdomens are very fat. They must decrease <strike>your </strike>their body's  size <strike>volume body</strike> with protein and vegetables. Carbohydrates are <strike>is</strike> taboo

Nobody is a type specific. We are a <strike>convination </strike>combination of <strike>some</strike>various types.

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My passion is doing sports 


I have been doing sports for 10 years ago. Now, I study nutrition in my free time. I had a basical knowledge to begin with but step by step I have learned more concepts.

For example, there are three types of bodies (ectomorfo, metomorfo and endomorfo). This depends on your genetics.

1) Ectomorfo is when a person is very thin. They can eat any type of foods but especially hydrates. They must increase their volume body volume.

2) Metomorfo is when a person is very strong. They have a perfect body and are very athletic. They have a dream body.

3) Endomorfo is when a person is very fat. They are shaped like a pear, with a lot of fat in their abdomen. They must reduce their volume body by eating protein and vegetables. Hydrates are tabboo.

Nobody is one specific type. We are a combination of mutliple types.

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