Hello, everyone! Hello! My name is Anastasiia! About four years ago I worked in chemical laboratory and couldn't imagine that some day I'll move to another country and I'll have to find new vocation,

Anastasiia

Hello, everyone! Hello! My name is Anastasiia! About four years ago I worked in chemical laboratory and couldn't imagine that some day I'll move to another country and I'll have to find new vocation, learn something totally different. But the day has come, I took my stuff and here I am! In another country with my husband, learn English and web development. I'm not an expert, but I want to be :)

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Hello, everyone!

Hello! My name is Anastasiia!
About four years ago, I worked in a chemical laboratory and couldn't imagine that some day I'll move to another country and that I'll have to find new vocation, and learn something totally different. But the day has come,. I took my stuff and here I am!, In in another country with my husband, to learn English and web development.
I'm not an expert, but I want to be. :)

Hey Anastasiia,

Nice post. Sounds very exciting! I just wanted to point out that I highlighted a few things in yellow which are technically correct, but could be better. Here are my suggestions for those parts:

couldn't imagine -> never imagined (makes the following sentence past hypothetical)

I'll -> I'd (past hypothetical)

stuff -> belongings (this is clearer because "took" has multiple meanings)

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