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A day in my life Usually my day starts at 5:00 a.m. I wake up before my dad so I take my dog with her blanket and we go to my dad's bedroom and I put her there. She doesn't like to wake up if it's dark outside. I do my bed and prepare everythinn to take the shower. After the shower I go downstairs and I make the coffee. While the coffee i ready I start doing my make up (we must use make up to be in the class). Then I have my breakfast, I clean the kitchen and I go upstairs to get ready. I have to wear and uniform so it's easy for me I don't have to think what I should wear that day. Then I do my hair and put everything I need in my bag and I put the bag on the motorcycle. I'm on my way to classes at 6:30 a.m. My class starts at 8:00 a.m I'm at the airport at 7:30 a.m (the school is in the airport). We can't be late or they won't open the door once is closed. If we are late three times that means one day absent. We finish at 11:00 am and then I go to the restaurant to get my lunch. At 11:30 a.m I'm on my way to my job. I'm at work at 12:20 p.m and I start working at 2:00 p.m. I take the advantage of studying that time and be sure to be ready for any question the teacher can ask. I'm out of my job at 9:00 p.m and I'm at home at 9:30 p.m I prepare coffee and go outside with my dog then I drink some coffee and go to sleep. Sometimes I wait for my parents to talk about how the day was. When I'm too tired I just go to bed and I send them a text saying that please wake me up when they are at home. I go to bed at 11:00 p.m maybe because I have to prepare everything for the next day. This is a normal day in my life. On weekends I do all the chores and payments I couldn't do on weekdays. Thank you for any correction you could give me. :)

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A day in my life

Usually my day starts at 5:00 a.m. I wake up before my dad so I take my dog with her blanket and we go to my dad's bedroom and I put her there. She doesn't like to wake up if it's dark outside.
I make my bed and prepare everything to take the shower. After the shower I go downstairs and I make the coffee. While the coffee is getting ready I start doing my make up (we must put on make up to be in the class). Then I have my breakfast, I clean the kitchen and I go upstairs to get ready. I have to wear a uniform so it's easy for me. I don't have to think about what I should wear that day. Then I do my hair and put everything I need in my bag and I put the bag on the motorcycle.
I make my way to classes at 6:30 a.m. My class starts at 8:00 a.m. I arrive to the airport at 7:30 a.m (the school is in the airport). We can't be late or they won't open the door once it is closed. If we are late three times that means one day absent.
We finish at 11:00 am and then I go to a restaurant to get my lunch. At 11:30 a.m I'm on my way to my job. I'm at work at 12:20 p.m and I start working at 2:00 p.m. I take the advantage of studying during that time and I am sure to be ready for any question the teacher can ask. I'm out of my job at 9:00 p.m and I'm at home at 9:30 p.m. I prepare coffee and go outside with my dog. Then I drink some coffee and go to sleep. Sometimes I wait for my parents to talk about how their day was. When I'm too tired I just go to bed and I send them a text saying to please wake me up when they get home. I go to bed at 11:00 p.m maybe because I have to prepare everything for the next day.
This is a normal day in my life. On weekends I do all the chores and payments I couldn't do on weekdays.
Thank you for any correction you could give me. :)


Very good! Your English is great :) if you want to have some sessions with me, I would love to teach you English! 

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A day in my life

Usually my day starts at 5:00 a.m. I wake up before my dad so I take my dog with her blanket and we go to my dad's bedroom and I put her there. She doesn't like to wake up if it's dark outside.
I do make my bed and prepare everything to take the a shower. After my shower I go downstairs and I make the coffee. While the coffee brews, i ready I start doing my make up (we must use make up to be in the class). Then I have my breakfast, I clean the kitchen and I go upstairs to get ready. I have to wear and a uniform so it's easy for me I don't have to think what I should wear that day. Then I do my hair and put everything I need in my bag and I put the bag on the motorcycle.
I'm on my way to classes at by 6:30 a.m. My class starts at 8:00 a.m I'm at the airport at 7:30 a.m (the school is in the airport). We can't be late or they won't open the door once is closed. If we are late three times that means we are marked one day absent.
We finish at 11:00 am and then I go to the restaurant to get order my lunch. At 11:30 a.m I'm on my way to my job. I'm at work at 12:20 p.m and I start working at 2:00 p.m. I take the advantage of studying that time by studying and I prepare for any question the teacher can ask. I'm out of done with my job at 9:00 p.m and I'm at home at by 9:30 p.m.  I prepare make coffee and go outside with my dog then I drink some coffee and go to sleep. Sometimes I wait for my parents to talk tell me about how the their day was. When I'm too tired I just go to bed and I send them a text saying that  asking them to please wake me up when they are at get home. I go to bed at 11:00 p.m (early?) maybe because I have to prepare everything for the next day.
This is a normal day in my life. On weekends I do all the chores and payments pay the bills I couldn't do on weekdays.
Thank you for any correction you could give me. :)
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Hi Natalia. I've answered in two parts, as it got too long. Anything taken out is in red, corrections are in blue, and my comments are in green.

A day in my life.

Usually my day starts at 5:00 a.m. I wake up before my Dad, so I take my dog with her blanket and we go to my Dad's bedroom, and I put her there. She doesn't like to wake up if it's dark outside.
I (do) make my bed (a bed is always "made") and prepare everything to take (the) a shower. (similarly to the motorcycle below, this is the first time you have mentioned a shower, so you mustn't use "the") After the shower I go downstairs, and I make (the) coffee. While the coffee (i ready) is boiling/preparing ( I'm not sure exactly what you mean here ) I start doing my make up (we must (use) wear make up (to be in) for the class). Then I have my breakfast. I clean the kitchen, and I go upstairs to get ready. I have to wear (and) a uniform, so it's easy for me; I don't have to think about what I should wear that day. Then I do my hair and put everything I need in my bag, and I put the bag on (the) my motorcycle. (I am not sure if it is yours or not, but you would not say "the" unless you had previously referred to it.)

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I'm on my way to class(es) at 6:30 a.m. My class starts at 8:00 a.m. I'm at the airport at 7:30 a.m (the school is in the airport). We can't be late or they won't open the door once it is closed. If we are late three times (that means) it is counted as one day absent. ... We finish at 11:00 am, and then I go to the restaurant to get my lunch. At 11:30 a.m I'm on my way to my job. I'm at work at 12:20 p.m and I start working at 2:00 p.m. I take the advantage of studying at that time and (be) am sure to be ready for any question the teacher can ask. I'm out of my job at 9:00 p.m and I'm at home at 9:30 p.m I prepare coffee and go outside with my dog, and then I drink some coffee and go to sleep. Sometimes I wait for my parents to talk about how the day was. When I'm too tired I just go to bed and I send them a text saying (that) to please wake me up when they are at home. I go to bed at about 11:00 p.m (maybe) because I have to prepare everything for the next day.
This is a normal day in my life. On weekends I do all the chores and payments I couldn't do on weekdays.
Thank you for any correction you could give me. :)


Well done, your entry is very good, and very readable! I noticed you've used more than one present tense in your exercise. I recommend that you pick one (any one) and stick to it from start to finish. If you have any question about why I corrected something, just ask me. :)

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