老公今天要出差
今天老公要飛往荷蘭出差一個星期。我大兒子和我本來打算陪他去，不過比利時幾個月前被恐怖分子攻擊以後，我們決定不去了。另外，我們想省點金錢為了在將來去台灣旅行！
(Today my husband is leaving for a business trip to the Netherlands. He'll be gone for a week. Originally, my older son and I were going to go with him, but after the terrorist bombings in Belgium, we decided not to. Also, we want to save money for a trip to Taiwan in the future!)
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In my opinion, most of this entry in Mandarin is quite ok except the last sentence.
I would say:此外，我們想把錢省下來以後去台灣玩！It would be more common.
By the way, very welcome to Taiwan.[emoji]
老公今天要出差
(Today my husband is leaving for a business trip to the Netherlands. He'll be gone for a week. Originally, my older son and I were going to go with him, but after the terrorist bombings in Belgium, we decided not to. Also, we want to save money for a trip to Taiwan in the future!)
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老公今天要出差
今天老公要飛往(or去)荷蘭出差一個星期。我大兒子和我本來打算陪他去，不過在比利時幾個月前被恐怖分子攻擊以後，我們決定不去了。另外，我們也想省點金錢為了在將來去台灣旅行！(Today my husband is leaving for a business trip to the Netherlands. He'll be gone for a week. Originally, my older son and I were going to go with him, but after the terrorist bombings in Belgium, we decided not to. Also, we want to save money for a trip to Taiwan in the future!)
P.S. Welcome to Taiwan! Haha :D
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老公今天要出差
今天老公要飛往荷蘭出一個星期差一個星期。我大兒子和我本來打算陪他去，不過比利時幾個月前的被恐怖分子攻擊之以後，我們決定不去了, 也。另外，我們想省點些金錢為了在將來去將來的台灣旅行！(Today my husband is leaving for a business trip to the Netherlands. He'll be gone for a week. Originally, my older son and I were going to go with him, but after the terrorist bombings in Belgium, we decided not to. Also, we want to save money for a trip to Taiwan in the future!)
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You got way too many ideas in the first sentence. I would either drop the 荷蘭 or 出差 part. So the sentence would be more digestable. In the last sentence, you can drop the 為了在將來去; the reason is that it is already implied you are going in the future
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