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An Ode to Pedestrians. We must love of pedestrians. Pedestrians make up a large part of humanity, moreover, it is the best part. Pedestrians created the world. They came up cities, built high-rise buildings, water supply and sanitation. They spread the culture around the world, invented a book printing, gunpowder, destroyed the slave trade. When the home planet became relatively a well-maintained, motorists appeared and started to crashed the gentle and intelligent of pedestrians.

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An Ode to Pedestrians.

We should love pedestrians. Pedestrians* make up a large part of humanity, moreover, it is the best part. Pedestrians created the world. They came up with cities, built high-rise buildings, water supplies and sanitation. They spread the culture around the world, invented book printing, gunpowder, invented then destroyed the slave trade. When the home planet became relatively well-maintained, motorists appeared and started to crush the gentle and intelligent of pedestrians.

*now I would start using 'they'...**

Very well written. Урра! Урра! Урра! (three cheers for pedestrians!)

**no, reconsidering, yours is better.

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