My day
Several days ago my friend invited me to her English class and I aaccepted it.But today I got close to forgetting it without her call.Unfortunatedly,I had to go there alone because she had left for it.She told me I must arrive there before 6:30pm.However,because I am a person who always lose my way,it has been 7pm when I arrived there.My friend and her teacher were angry with me because I was late and broke my word.I was in great sorrow !It seemed like I did it on purpose.(Today is my first day to come here.I don't know what I can write here so I just tell my story.I would appreciate it if you can give me some advice about how to improve my spoken and written English.Thanks a lot!)
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My day
Several days ago my friend invited me to her English class and I accepted it the invite.But, today I got close to forgetting we were going it without her call to remind me .Unfortunatedly Unfortunately ,I had to go there alone because she had already left for it the class.She told me I must arrive there before 6:30pm.However,because I am a person who always lose my way always get lost,it has been was 7pm when I arrived there.My friend and her teacher were both angry with me because I was late and did not show up on time.I was in great sorrow very upset !It seemed like I did it on purpose.(Today is my first day to come on italki here. I don't know what I can write here so I am just telling my story.I would appreciate it if you can give me some advice about how to improve my spoken and written English.Thanks a lot!)My notes: Mainly, instead of saying "it" and "here", be more specific about what noun you are talking about. For example "Several days ago my friend invited me to her English class and I accepted it," when you say "accepted it", you could mean you accepted the invite, or accepted the english class (even though that doesn't make sense). So I would replace it, with the noun you are talking about specifically, like I already left for the class. I hope this helps.
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