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A woman who is much talked about these days in Japan The woman was born and raised in America, but her parents are Japanese. After she graduated from Brown and Harvard University, she worked as an intern in the office of the former President Clinton or Interpol. Furthermore, she passed an employment test of CIA and FBI. (Do you know that CIA's employment test takes two years because they do employees' background check?) FBI gives prospective employees a lie detector test again right before they enter FBI. She had already taken this kind of test many times, but she failed it with this question "Have you ever taken illegal drugs?" She was disappointed at this fact that the detector test considered as the highest quality was failed. Isn't this scary? This result means that it has the potential to generate false accusation. She wanted to eradicate terrorists to make the world peaceful, but after this accident, her passion was gone and decided to do the same thing by becoming a COMEDIENNE instead!! I really respect her high ambition, but I think she is not cut out to be a comedian because nobody was laughing at her performance…

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A woman who is currently much talked about a lot these days in Japan

The woman was born and raised in America, but her parents are Japanese. After she graduated from Brown and Harvard University, she worked as an intern in the office of the former President Clinton, and then or Interpol. ("or" would mean one or the other, and I'm assuming you meant that she worked for both)

Furthermore, she passed an employment tests of CIA and FBI. (Do you know that the CIA's employment test takes two years because they do an employees' background check?) The FBI gives prospective employees a lie detector test again right before they enter the FBI. She had already taken this kind of test many times, but she failed it with this question "Have you ever taken illegal drugs?" She was disappointed at the this fact that this question was the detector test considered the most important as the highest quality was failed. (I'm making an assumption about what the last sentence was saying. Sorry if this was not what you meant to say)

Isn't this scary? This result means that it has the potential to generate false accusation. (Not sure what you mean here. Do you mean that the question might force people to lie? Did she fail because she lied or because she answered yes? I do know that they will turn people away who answer yes, even if that means they pass the lie detector test.)

She wanted to eradicate terrorists to make the world peaceful, but after this eventaccident, her passion was gone. She and decided to do the same thing by becoming a COMEDIANCOMEDIENNE instead!! I really respect her high ambition, but I think she is not cut out to be a comedian because nobody was laughing at her performance…


I tried to find out who this was. Is this Reina? I haven't heard her routine.

Green = notes

Blue = It was OK, I just thought it would sound more natural like this

Yellow = change

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