childhood ambitions
When I was a child, I used to think in to be a famous singer, however, while the time passed that idea was dissapearing in my mind. In other hand, I also wanted to be an enginieer becuase I wanted to know how objects which we use every day are made.
Now, I am doing this last my childhood dream. I study chemical engienering and I really like to study it. One of the reasons why I like it, it´s because I learn about matter and how we can transform them to make different object to live an better life.
But, for these days my other dream is returning in my mind and I would like to be an singer, Having the opportunity to convey emotions.
Could you correct my mistakes, please?
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childhood ambitions
When I was a child, I wanted to be a famous singer, however,as the time passed that idea has dissapearing in my mind. In other hand I also wanted to be an enginieer becuase I wanted to know how objects which we use every day are made.Now, I am fulfilling my childhood dream. I am studyng chemical engienering and I really like to study it. One of the reasons why I like it, it´s because I learn about matter and how we can transform them to make different object to live a better life.
But,nowadays my other dream is returning to my mind and I would like to be a singer, to Have the opportunity to convey emotions.
I used the underlined words to point to either mistakes or exchangin words.
Very good passage good luck .
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