Writing peice Task 1 IELTS writing. Please correct the mistake and tell me how to improve the text.
The picture displays details about resort island, inform of two diagram with scale, the first on for geographic information, and the second for building and facilities. The pear like island is 250 to 300 meters length and less than 100 meters width in the longest part of the island, in the east. The reception is located in the center of the island, it is single big building encircled with car roads, to connect it the restaurant north and to the duck south. On the both side of the reception, cabins are arranged in two big circles one on each side, 9 of them on the right and 6 on the left, with walking track connection in between of them, to make them look like a <sun drew by a child.>
The beach prepared to swimming are located in the far west of the island. The duck is T-shap with two boats, one on each side. The coconuts trees are scattered all over the island.
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Writing peice Task 1 IELTS writing. Please correct the mistake and tell me how to improve the text.
The picture displays details about resort island, inform of two diagram with scale, the first on for geographic information, and the second for building and facilities. > The picture shows the layout of the island resort with the help of two scaled maps of the entire island. The first map shows its topography, and the other shows the location of its various building and facilities.The pear-shaped like island is between 250 to 300 meters in length and slightly less than 100 meters at its widest point in the eastern part of the island. part the longest part of the island, in the east. The reception is located in the centre of the island. It is in a big building, and it is encircled by car a road that will lead you to the restaurant in the north and the pier in the south. Located on the either side of the reception building cabins are cabins that are arranged in a circle: two big circles one on each side 9 cabins in the area to its right and 6 to its left. The cabins in each area are connected by a circular pathway that has a path to every cabin . whichwith walking track connection in between of them, to make them look like a
The beach prepared to for swimming is are located in the far western end of the island. The pier is T-shaped, and there are 2 boats there, one on each side. The Coconuts trees are widespread scattered throughout/ all over the island.
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