Ielts essay practising

"Tourism is an ever growing industry.
What benefits do you think tourism brings to individuals and society?"

The tourist industry <strike>keeps</strike> <strike>increasing</strike><font style="background-color: yellow;"> continues to grow every day</font>. More and more people <font style="background-color: yellow;">are</font> enjoy<font style="background-color: yellow;">ing</font> their holidays in <strike>other</strike> places or countries <font style="background-color: yellow;">other</font> than where they live. This development contributes to better employment chances for individuals <font style="background-color: yellow;">and benefits</font> <strike>as for</strike> the local economy of the society.

Firstly, all the tourists coming to a certain place will <font style="background-color: yellow;">bring</font> <strike>give </strike>the local individuals work. All <strike>those</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">these</font> visitors will want to go eat<strike>ing</strike> in restaurants, or they <font style="background-color: yellow;">will</font> want to go for a sightseeing tour. They also might go snorkelling or visit a local museum. All <font style="background-color: yellow;">of</font> these <strike>possible</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">potential</font> <font style="background-color: yellow;">tourism</font> places<strike> tourists go to,</strike> provide jobs for the local community. Those individuals will find more jobs when tourists keep coming to their cities.

Secondly, the <strike>increase</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">increasing number</font> of tourists <strike>also</strike> benefits the <strike>whole </strike>society <font style="background-color: yellow;">as a whole</font>. When the industry grows, the economy will be boosted enormously. The first reason<strike> to believe that</strike><font style="background-color: yellow;"> for this</font> is that the local community will gain more jobs to satisfy the needs of the tourists. When people have jobs, they have more money to spend, which contributes to a better economy. The second reason is that those tourists themselves are spending money as well. If they want to do a sightseeing tour or <strike>they</strike> go to a restaurant, they will give money in return <strike>of</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">for</font> those favours.

In conclusion<font style="background-color: yellow;">,</font> it can be said that the growing tourist industry contributes to better employment for the individuals of the local community. <strike>They </strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">These individuals</font> will be able to get a job <strike>in satisfying</strike><font style="background-color: yellow;"> contributing towards the satisfaction of </font>the travelers. It also benefits the society because the economy <strike>increases </strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">improves</font> as a result of tourists spending money for leisure activities.