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Time to love A short story. Some thoughts about life. I would be grateful for correction of my mistakes in this text. No doubt, there is time to love. Love, friendly heart warmth, understanding, compassion – that are the true treasures of our earthly life. Different feelings flow through our heart in a stream, but love is indeed the key to the power and wonders of the Universe. It warms and opens our hearts, through love we gain the strength to accomplish for our loved ones something, what we maybe couldn’t do for ourselves. Love is that very basis, energy, powerful force, which penetrates and holds together everything in the Universe. Human is given the freedom to choose, he is granted an honorable role of co-creator in this world. When heart is open and clear, love lives in it and flows from it generously, like a crystal pure stream – and it will never grow scarce, because the source of this love is the energy of the whole Universe. And it seeks the possibility to express itself – to create, to bring joy, warmth and tenderness, to say beautiful words, to bestow gifts and to share generously the miracle-working power of its love. How possibly such a source could grow scarce?.. Loving heart is the most precious treasure of the Universe, its most generous gift, since it is the key to its boundless power and might. Loving heart can make miracles and dispel the strongest darkness, like the sun, which flared up in the night. Love is like water, which always finds its way. There are thousands of ways to express it. Loving heart leads us on the true way. Loving heart is the most reliable compass of the Universe. No doubt, there is time to love. And this time is our whole life.

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Time to love

A short story. Some thoughts about life. I would be grateful for correction of my mistakes in this text.

No doubt, there is time to love. Love, the  friendly warmth of the heart, understanding, compassion – these are the true treasures of our earthly life. Different feelings flow through our heart in a stream, but love is indeed the key to the power and wonders of the Universe. It warms and opens our hearts. Through love we gain the strength to accomplish things for our loved ones that maybe we could not do for ourselves. 

Love is that very foundation, the energy, the powerful force*, which penetrates and holds together everything in the Universe. Humans are given the freedom to choose, we are * granted the honorable role of co-creator in this world. When heart is open and clear, love lives in it and flows from it generously, like a crystal pure stream – and it will never grow scarce, because the source of this love is the energy of the whole Universe. And it seeks the possibility to express itself – to create, to bring joy, warmth and tenderness, to say beautiful words, to bestow gifts and to share generously the miracle-working power of its love. How could such a source possibly grow scarce?..

A loving heart is the most precious treasure of the Universe, its most generous gift, since it is the key to its boundless power and might. A loving heart can make miracles and dispel the strongest darkness, like the sun, which flares up in the night. 

Love is like water, which always finds its way. There are thousands of ways to express it. A loving heart leads us on the true way. A loving heart is the most reliable compass of the Universe.
No doubt, there is time to love. And this time is our whole life.



*  Usually if I use the word " basis" I would use it as part of a phrase like "basis of (something)" or "basis for (something)."

Example:  "Love is the basis for understanding all good things in the universe." 

  " The love that my mother showed me when I was a child is the basis for my belief in human goodness."


* You could also write "Every human is given the freedom to choose.  He is granted the honorable role..."


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Your writing is excellent, by the way. It's very interesting and philosophical.

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