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Diary Entry for February 1st Today,it's the turn for our family to invite guests. We decide to invite them to have a hot pot. There's a popular hot pot buffet restaurant around our house. This buffet restaurant not only has a delicious taste,but also has a cheap price. Everyone just needs to pay for 40 RMB,the price includes varieties of meat,vegetables,fruits and drinks. I think many relatives unite together to have a hot pot can stimulate appetite. Since we can chat with each other while eating. It's very happy to have lunch in such a harmonious atmosphere!
1 ก.พ. 2017 เวลา 2:14
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Diary Entry for February 1st

Today,it's our family's turn to invite guests. We decided to invite them over for a hot pot. There's a popular hot pot buffet restaurant near our house. This buffet-style restaurant not only has cheap food, but it's also delicious!. Everyone just needs to pay 40 RMB - the price includes different varieties of meat,vegetables,fruits and drinks.
I think many relatives united together to have a hot pot can stimulate appetite, since we can chat with each other while eating. It's wonderful to have lunch in such a harmonious atmosphere!
1 กุมภาพันธ์ 2017

Diary Entry for February 1st

Today,it's the our family's turn for our family to invite guests. We decided to invite them to have a hot pot. There's a popular hot pot buffet restaurant around our house. This buffet restaurant not only has a delicious taste,but it also has a cheap price. Everyone just needs to pay for 40 RMB,and the price includes varieties of meat,vegetables,fruits, (Optional comma, but it's best to include it.) and drinks.
I think many relatives who unite together to have a hot pot can stimulate appetites. (<-- 这句话听上去比较奇怪。你可以用中文写一遍吗?) Since we can chat with each other while eating, it's very creates a very happy moment to have lunch in such a harmonious atmosphere!

Dahlia,写得不错。有一些句子好像是直接重中文翻译成英文,对不对?麻烦你把第二段用中文写一遍,我可以帮你改的跟标准。

1 กุมภาพันธ์ 2017
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