Please correct my sentence .
I really like fishing in my free time.When I was 11, My friend told me that. So, I often used to go out to river to catch a fish. We ride bicycle with putting a rod on my shoulder.Time is passed and We went another school each other and each of them has own new friend and community.Everyone has their old friend . Sometime, Thinking of that brings back memories and that makes me feel nostalgic. .
Please teach me more suitable representation.
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Your English is so good! The word nostalgic is an impressive vocabulary word. I'm sure my 9 year old son (a native speaker) does not know this word.
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Please correct my sentence .
In my free time, I really like fishing. When I was 11, my friend introduced fishing to me. I often used to go out to river to catch fish. We rode our bicycles with the rod over my shoulder. Time has passed and we have gone to different schools. We both have our own new friends and social groups.Everyone has old friends. Sometimes, thinking about fishing/about my old friend/that time [it is not clear exactly what 'that' is referring to] brings back memories and makes me feel nostalgic. .
Please teach me more suitable representation.
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Please correct my sentence.
I really like fishing in my free time. When I was 11, my friend told me about fishing. So, I often used to go out to the river to catch a fish. We rode bicycles and I carried a rod on my shoulder. Time passed and we went to different schools from each other and each of us had our own new friends and community. Everyone has their old friends. Sometimes, thinking of that brings back memories, and that makes me feel nostalgic.Please teach me a better way to say it.
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