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Spring equinox day Hi,everyone. Today is Spring equinox day in Japan. I like this day because I feel exactly(very??) start wonderful season that sorunded beautiful cherry blossams and the smiling or exited faces in everywhere. A TV show introduced a woman who came from Washington and contributed to make row of cherry blossam trees in Washington. Her mane is Eliza Ruhamah Scidmore and there are famous cherry blossam trees named Scidmore in Yokohama. In her pharase, usually Japanese seems to be very quiet and doesn't express his or her feeling, but when they gathered under the 'SAKURA' they are chenging as if different person like happy, light and jolly people who singing songs or doing party tricks or laghing loudly. She was attracted the beauty of the trees and atmosphere, she moved to make the row. As a Japanese, I think her pharaces is exactly right. Althogh I feel that's so wired, when I see cherry blossams, I feel so happy and joyful. In my case, I'm not a quiet person,though. Maybe because they are very very beautiful. Anyway, when I heard about Scidmore's story, I feel that a part of sence of beauty might be common in the world, and I was so happy to see some connection between Japan and US before the world war 2 to lasting now. I will go to Washington in spring someday! Thank you.

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Spring equinox day

Hi, everyone. Today is Spring Equinox Day in Japan. (<--Capitalize names of holidays.)

I like this day, because I feel exactly(very??) excited for the start of a wonderful season that is surrounded by beautiful cherry blossoms and the smiling or excited faces in everywhere.
A TV show introduced a woman who came from Washington and contributed to making a row of cherry blossom trees in Washington. Her mane (mane = 鬣) name is Eliza Ruhamah Scidmore, and there are famous cherry blossom trees named Scidmores in Yokohama.
In her pharase words, usually the Japanese seems to be very quiet and doesn't don't express his or her their feelings, but when they gathered under the "SAKURA," they are chenging as if change into different person like people: happy, light, and jolly people who singing songs, or doing perform party tricks, or laughing loudly. She was attracted to the beauty of the trees and atmosphere, so she moved to make the row in Washington.
As a Japanese person, I think her pharaces is words are exactly right. Although I feel that's it's so wired weird, when I see cherry blossoms, I feel so happy and joyful. In my case though, I'm not a quiet person,though. Maybe it's because they are very, very beautiful.

Hi Maiko! This is well written! I'm over the 5000 character limit, so I cannot correct anymore, but I hope what I was able to correct is helpful to you. Please let me know if you have any questions =)

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