black sesame soup(please help me correct my essay,thx)
it is common in southern China. it taste sweet, it looks like black coffee. It's a good choice to dink in winter or have a cold, cuz it can warm your body, it can make your skin more smooth and reduce wrinkle if you drink it for a long time.both the recipe and method of black seasame soup is very easy. I would like to recommend this popular dish which is one of my favorites. you can
cooked it within 5 minutes. so let's cut to the chase.........the method is too difficult to descript in English. so that's over.
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Black Sesame Soup (please help me correct my essay,thx)
It is common in southern China. It tastes sweet, and it looks like black coffee. It's a good choice to drink in winter or when you have a cold because it can warm your body. It can make you skin more smooth and reduce wrinkles if you drink it for a long time. Both the recipe and method of black sesame soup is very easy. I would like to recommend this popular dish which is one of my favorites. You can cook it within 5 minutes. So let's cut to the chase.........the method is too difficult to describe in English. so that's over.-Always begin a sentence with a capital letter.
-You need to pay more attention to where you need to end and start sentences.
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