Opening paragraphs of a story (corrections and suggestions are appreciated) (Look at this painting and write the opening paragraphs of a story inspired by it. Think about what happened before the scene in the picture and in the moment it captures.) Mary and Lorna knew each other for a long time. They agreed to meet up at Berna Coffeeshop once again, as they have done for years. A couple of hours earlier when Mary phoned Lorna, she sounded grieving as if something unfortunate had happened to her. Her trembled voice impacted her old friend, who decided to show up into the Cafe right away. Mary looked nervous indeed. She explained to Lorna that her husband had been looking for a job for a long time and now he seemed to have found one. Little did she knew when he told her about his new job that it would imply them to move thousand of miles away from where they both grew up. It was October and outside the coffee place, the rain was beating hard the leaves that had fallen into the street. When Mary mentioned her short departure Lorna turned pale. It felt to her as if someone cut her through with a knife. It couldn´t be worse. Her best and most beloved friend was meant to leave the country within a few days and that severely shocked her. She didn´t know how to react to the unexpected news and what to say in return. "Nothing can´t keep us apart" she prompted and holding her friend´s hand, she suddenly started crying. Deeply affected by Lorna´s reaction, Mary handed her a letter before she left the place. She has always hated farewells and that was the most awkward moment that she has to face so far.