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It was three o’clock in the morning when the phone rang…
It was three o’clock in the morning when the phone rang. I was sleeping well, literally exhausted after a long hard working day. I had no idea what would happen as this was the first time my phone had rung so early in the morning, because I had been woke up I decided to answer it.Someone extremely excited was speaking to me. ‘Hey, buddy! Glad to hear from you!’ said a stranger. ‘You won't believe what has just happened to me. I found her, my true love that I’ve been looking for all my life, she is sitting in front of me at the bar, smiling and talking to someone. What am I going to do? Should I go and talk to her? But what I’m going to say?’. I thought that I'd missed some of the conversation cause my eyes were sticking together. But without any shadow of a doubt I said ‘Just do it. Go over to her, say your name and order her a drink. Then if you like each other everything will happened by itself’. I don't remember what happened next because I fell asleep.
The next morning, I woke up as usual and didn’t remember anything about what had happened earlier that morning. A month later the door bell rung. I opened the door and saw my friend who just came back from the USA, but he was not alone, he was with a beautiful girlfriend. They both were smiling at me and seemed really happy. He said ‘Thanks man, without that call and your motivational words I would have never come up to this girl, We are going to get married and we came here to invite you to our wedding in few months. Thanks again.’ I was really happy for them but at the same time a little bit confused and couldn't understand what he was talking about, what call, what motivational words?...
This was a good start, just try to remember past and present tense. Keep it up! :)
It was three o’clock in the morning when the phone rang…
It was three o’clock in the morning when my phone rang. I was sleeping deeply/well, (literally) exhausted after a long hard working day. I had no idea what might have happened, asSomeone on the other end of the line started to speak to me in an extremely excited manner.
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The next morning, I woke up as usual, but I had forgotten/ and didn’t remember anything / about what had happened the
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