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The notion idea i'm I'm going to deal with is the notion idea of spaces ans and exchanges. It can be defined as the movements movement of or circulation in differents different countries of the world . it It includes all types of media, of communication, etc. I'm going interesting about interested in the exchanges of human people in the country of new Zealand , a country populated by whose population is 4.7 millions million and whose who are 74% Europeans, European, and 15% Maoris.

This number represented represents the various cultures presents present in NZ. That way So, I would like to try to and answer the question as to what extent NZ is a melting pot a for various cultures?. We I will focus on the populations who that have succeeded in new Zealand since the British colonization, then I'm going to deal with the immigration and tourism.

Thanks

Hi Doriane, I hope these corrections help you!

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Very good Doriane. Instead of the word 'faults' in the opening sentence, you could also use 'errors', which would make a little more sense grammatically. i.e. grammatical errors. 

There were some parts where I make some guesses as to what you mean't exactly. Where you said: "I'm going interesting about..." I assumed you were trying to say you are interested in something.

Next, to be 'interested' is not the same as to be 'interesting'. I will explain: When talking about yourself or your feelings, use the -ed ending. 

"I am interested in sports". "I am excited by the study of language" 

When talking about others, OR, something outside yourself, use the -ing ending. 

"That book is interesting". "That sport is exciting" . 

You would NOT say: "That book is interested". That would be silly, because it implies the book has feelings. A book can't be interested in something. But, it can be interesting. 

I really hope this helps. If I wasn't clear, or I was too confusing please let me know. Good luck.