30/05/2017
I decided to write a dairy everyday from today. (maybe..) Because (in English you cannot start a sentence with because. An option you could do is take away the period after the word today and replace it with a comma(,) so that it makes one sentence) I heard that writing (need to add the word "a" as in "a diary") dairy is the best way to improve a language. But don't take too much time, we should limit the time and keep everyday.(this last sentence doesn't make sense, story, I could not understand what you mean. You may want to try aging that differently) So, I will try!!
By the way, I live in Canada now with a working holiday visa and I am an English teacher for kids at my language school. There are 3 boys. Their age(change to the plural, so it would be "ages" instead of "age" the singular because there is more than one boy) are different and (maybe change to:"their language levels are different too")each level are different as well. It is hard to(take away that last "to")for me to take care of them (maybe add in "all with only me as a teacher")But (can't start sentences in English with but either so maybe add in a comma (,) after the word teacher and before the word but.)
of course they are cute.
It's been almost 4 (for numbers under 10 in English you usually spell them out in writing.) months since I came here, but actually my English does (change into: has not improved very much instead of, does not improve so much not improve so (change so into the word very)much. I think the reason is that I don't have friends of (change into: who are native speakers instead of, of native speakers.)native speakers. Please tell me someone how to make native speakers friends!( change into, can someone please tell me how to make native friends?)
And please correct my dairy:)
Thank you.
Sorry I had to rush a little but I hope this helps! If you need me to clear anything up just send me a message! Bye-Dani
The word you used is dairy, which means to be made from or to contain milk. I believe the word you want it diary, meaning a journal.
