我需要去工作里了

It is morning now.
现在是早上。

I need to get ready to go to work.
我需要准备去工作

I am going to have a cup of soy milk and some crackers, as I do every day.
我要和一杯黄豆喝一杯豆奶并且吃几个饼干，像每天往常一样。

Later I will come back home and play games on the computer.
我后来家里回来，游戏在电脑   之后我会回家，玩电脑游戏

我需要去工作里

我需要去工作

It is morning now.
现在早上。

现在是早上。

I need to get ready to go to work.
我需要准备去工作

我需要做好准备去工作

I am going to have a cup of soy milk and some crackers, as I do every day.
我要和一杯黄豆并且吃几个饼干，像每天。

我要喝一杯黄豆浆并且吃几个饼干，像往常一样。

Later I will come back home and play games on the computer.
我后来家里回来，游戏在电脑

之后，我会回到家里，玩电脑游戏

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我需要去工作里

It is morning now.
现在早上。

I need to get ready to go to work.
我需要准备去工作

I am going to have a cup of soy milk and some crackers, as I do every day.
我准备喝一杯黄豆，吃几个饼干，像往常一样。

Later I will come back home and play games on the computer.
等会儿我会回家，在电脑上玩游戏

我要准备去工作了

It is morning now.
现在早上。我（现在是早上。）

I need to get ready to go to work.
我需要准备去工作（我要准备去工作了。）

I am going to have a cup of soy milk and some crackers, as I do every day.
我要和一杯黄豆并且吃几个饼干，像每天。（我会喝一杯豆浆吃几块饼干，跟平时一样。）

Later I will come back home and play games on the computer.
我后来家里回来，游戏在电脑（下班后我回家玩电脑游戏。）