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Ksenia
IELTS GT Writing task#1 Hello all, I've just started preparation for my IELTS exam and really need another pair of eyes who can check my writing parts. ==Task== You saw an advert in the newspaper asking for volunteers to help run a charity event. Write a letter of application to the organisers. In your letter: explain why you are interested in helping give details suitable past experience suggest ways you might help with the event ==Letter== Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to in connection with adwert, which i recently saw in newspaper. The advwrtisment said that you are looking for volunteers to help run a charity event, which will take place in our town soon. For a long time I've been following the work that you are doing to help homeless people and thats I am really thrilled with oppurtuinity to be part of that. At present I am in my third year studing Sociology at Lincoln College. Our college constantly organizes volunteering programms. In the last three years I took part at five volunteering events, the biggest of them was "Give me a paw" may be you've herd about it. The main goal of this program was to find home to one hundred animals, my job was organaize food supplying for all of them. I supose that my organization skills can be useful for you. I have herd that on your event you will open free canteen and I will be delighted to help you with that as well as with other tasks where I will be able to make a benefit. Thank you for your consideration of my application. I look forward to meeting you in the nearest future. Yours sincerely, Andy Gamilton
7 ก.ย. 2017 เวลา 22:01
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Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to you in connection with an advert, which I recently saw in the newspaper.

The advwertisment said that you are looking for volunteers to help run a charity event,
which will take place in our town soon. For a long time I've been following the work that
you are doing to help homeless people and thats I am really thrilled with oppurtuinity to be part of that.

I would be thrilled to be given an opportunity to take part in it.

At present I am in my third year studing Sociology at Lincoln College. Our college constantly organizes
volunteering programms. (please choose a spelling of “program” to suit the country you are in, see below)

In British English, <em>program </em>refers to computer programs and their programming, and <em style="color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: Georgia, serif; font-size: 15px;">programme </em>is used for all other senses of the word. Americans and Canadians don’t use <em style="color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: Georgia, serif; font-size: 15px;">programme </em>at all, preferring <em style="color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: Georgia, serif; font-size: 15px;">program </em>for all senses of the word.

In the last three years I took part at in five volunteering events, the biggest of them was
"Give me a paw" may be you've herd  heard about it. The main goal of this program was to find a home to for one hundred animals,
my job was to organise the food supply for all of them.

I suppose that my organization skills can be useful for you. I believe that my organisational skills would benefit your team. I have heard that on during the your event you will open free canteen  a free canteen will be made available to participants and
I will would be delighted to help you with that task, as well as with any other tasks that may need doing. where I will be able to make a benefit.

Thank you for your consideration. of my application. (or thank you for considering my application) I look forward to meeting you in the nearest future.

(or:- "I look forward to meeting you at your earliest convenience” but this is more formal, probably better to stick with near future...)

Yours sincerely,
Andy Gamilton

7 กันยายน 2017
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IELTS GT Writing task#1

Hello all,
I've just started preparation for my IELTS exam and really need another pair of eyes who can check my writing parts.

==Task==
You saw an advert in the newspaper asking for volunteers to help run a charity event.

Write a letter of application to the organizers. In your letter:

explain why you are interested in helping
give details suitable past experience
suggest ways you might help with the event

==Letter==

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to in connection with the advert, which I recently saw in a newspaper.
The advertisement said that you are looking for volunteers to help run a charity event,
which will take place in our town soon. For a long time, I've been following the work that you
are doing to help homeless people. Indeed I am really thrilled with the opportunity to be part of that.

At present, I am in my third year studying Sociology at Lincoln College. Our college constantly organizes volunteering
programs. In the last three years I took part at five volunteering events, the biggest of them was
"Give me a paw" may be you've heard about it. The main goal of this program was to find a home to one hundred animals,
my job was to organize food supplying for all of them.

I suppose that my organization skills can be useful for you. I have heard that in your event you will open free canteen and
I would be delighted to help you with it as well as with other tasks where I would be able to make a benefit.

Thank you for your consideration of my application. I look forward to meeting you in the nearest future.

Yours sincerely,
Andy Gamilton


Hi Ksenia, I'm not an English speaker but I saw some mistakes so I correct them. I've wanted to prepare my IELTS exam too. So if you want we could help each other. 

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