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Last 15: 1 Recklessly is an adverb, and you can’t put it before a noun like ‘idea.’ You could try, ‘Your idea was reckless’, or ‘You recklessly tried your idea’. These sentences mean different things, though… 2 It’s a good sentence. 3 This sentence is missing articles; try ‘I reinforced the broken roof’ 4 The sentence is OK. I think I should note that using the present tense like this isn’t that common in spoken English, though. 5 This is missing an article. You can use, ‘The restaurant held a reunion party’, ‘The restaurant holds a reunion party’, ‘The restaurant is holding a reunion party’, all of which mean slightly different things. If you want to say the restaurant is holding a particular reunion party that isn’t repeated, ‘The restaurant is holding a reunion party’ is fine when describing a future or currently occurring party. 6 Needs articles. ‘She is a rigid person’ 7 You can try ‘We are sports rivals’, ‘We have a rivalry when it comes to sports’ 8 I think ‘many’ sounds unnatural here. You can use, ‘I scattered all of my clothing’, ‘I scattered all the clothing’ 9 No problems for this sentence. 10 I feel word ‘skeptical’ isn’t used correctly here. You can try, ‘I’m skeptical of what he said’, or ‘What he said made him sound like he was skeptical’ 11 This is worded awkwardly. You can try, ‘I find the music soothing’, ‘The music is soothing’. 12 This house had a spacious room. 13 I was startled by a loud voice 14 It’s a good sentence 15 This sentence is alright. If it had more detail, like ‘I strive to make dinner every day’, or ‘I strive to make dinner for my family’, I would have no complaints. As is, the sentence feels empty somehow.

19 Worded as it is, ‘What is an indispensable part of our lives’ needs to be a question. If it’s a statement, you need to replace ‘What’ with a noun. Or, if you are commenting on something, you can say ‘What an indispensable part of our lives.’ You could say that when looking at, say, a car, or a phone. In this situation you’re describing the car / phone. 20 ‘I write a list of the ingredients of the cake’ is technically correct. I want to offer: ‘I wrote a list of cake ingredients’, ‘I wrote a list of ingredients for the cake’, ‘I will write a list of ingredients for the cake’. The meaning of these are slightly different from each other.

2nd 20: 1 I still cherish the jacket my mother bought for me. 2 I made a chronological table of Japanese history. 3 He is clumsy: OK 4 What a coincidence!: OK 5 I compiled this book. OK 6 I will make a compliment to my junior / I made a compliment to my junior. It is a little unclear if you just use ‘junior.’ If it’s school, you can say ‘underclassman.’ If it’s work, you can say ‘subordinate.’ You may want to be careful calling people subordinates, though. 7 ‘My feeling’ seems vague. If you specify what the feeling is about, it will help. Ie. ‘My feelings on hot food is conditional on the weather.’ 8 I conform to the rules. If it is a single rule, I conformed to the rule. 9 This needs an article: ‘I confront the insect’ 10 Silence is consent, or silence means consent sound more natural. 11 Needs articles: The customer grumbled at the clerk 12 This sentence is OK 13 Harshly is an adverb; to use it before a noun, you need the sentence, ‘I heard a harsh voice from the forest.’ For an example of the adverb, you can rearrange the sentence like this: ‘I heard a voice harshly echoing through the forest’ 14 I have never seen heritage? This one is hard to understand… sorry! When I read this sentence, the closest thought I can think of is: ‘I am completely detached from my heritage’, ‘I know nothing of my heritage.’ 15 This is a good sentence to use often right? 16 This is a good set phrase, and OK to use. It’s polite. 17 ‘Hush’ isn’t used that often, and I would honestly try replacing it, but you can try ‘Tell the children to hush.’ That’s very casual though… AND it makes you sound old. 18 The sentence is good