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Hi guys ! Could you check it, please ? :) Last year we went to the mountains. We both skied before but snowboarding was a completely new sport for us. We had booked some lessons before we arrived and on the first morning we hired our helmets. We both felt quite nervous but very excited as we took the lift up the mountain. The first lesson was really challenging and we fell over a lot ! By the end of the first day, we had been exhausted. The following morning, our legs were ached and tired but we didn't give up. After three days of lessons, we felt more confident and we really started to enjoy ourselves. On the fourth day, we tried a more difficult slope and I'm proud to say I got all the way to the bottom without falling over.

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Hi, guys ! Could you check out my notebook entry, please ? :)

Last year we went to the mountains. We had both skied before but snowboarding was a completely new sport for us. We had booked some lessons before we arrived and on the first morning there, we rented helmets. We both felt quite nervous but very excited as we took the lift up the mountain. The first lesson was really challenging and we fell over a lot ! By the end of the first day, we were exhausted. The following morning, our legs were sore (or "were achy" or "were aching" but "sore" is more common in my opinion) and tired but we didn't give up. After three days of lessons, we felt more confident and we really started to enjoy ourselves. On the fourth day, we tried a more difficult slope and I'm proud to say I got all the way to the bottom without falling over.
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