Please check my text is it is good and i would be glad if you will correct my grammar mistakes.thank
Please discuss why you wish to participate in this program. Include your current personal teaching philosophy, how your participation in the Institute will enhance your work, improve education about the United States in your community, and help you achieve the “Other Potential Outcomes” you have checked above.
I am an English Teacher in the Republic of Georgia. I was teaching high school students and currently, I am teaching school students, Besides this, I am tutoring The Georgian language via Skype. I am studying teacher training program as well, but why? Because I want to improve my teaching skills and become more and more successful in a teaching career. I have a BA in English philology and MA in American in studies in Romania. My teaching philosophy is wide and it includes potential growth for children education in Georgia. Frankly speaking, I want to help Georgian students to increase the level of English knowledge and become more motivated to learn a new language, I want really to go in the USA I would say it is my American dream to improve myself there. The USA is a country where you can get the knowledge of training and future development, This program will give me life-changing moment in my life. Back to my country, I will do my best to share my experience with Georgians.
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Hi Maya,
The highlighted and bolded words are some of the corrections I would make. As Sarah mentioned below, I would be sure to use more formal language.
I wish you the best of luck on your application!
I am an English Teacher in the Republic of Georgia. I was teaching high school students and currently, I am teaching school students. Besides this, I am tutoring students in the The Georgian language via Skype. In order to improve my teaching skills and become the best teacher possible, I am also studying in a teacher training program. as well. but why? Because I want to improve my teaching skills and become more and more successful in a teaching career. I have a BA in English philology and an MA in American in studies in Romania. My teaching philosophy is wide and it includes potential growth for childrens' education in Georgia. Frankly speaking, I want to help Georgian students to increase their the level of English knowledge and become more motivated to learn a new language. I want really am determined to go in to the USA U.S. I would say it is my American dream to improve myself there. The USA U.S. is a country where you can get the gain the knowledge of training and future development. This program would be life-changing for me! will give me life-changing moment in my life.When I return to When I return to my country, I will share my experiences and training from the U.S. with Georgians.
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Hello Maya,
thanks for sharing your writing. I guess this is an application? If so, your language needs to be quite formal and accurate.
1. used to is better here IF you taught high school kids before and now teach another age group. Is this what you mean? It's not clear
2. .... and currently teach school students. What age group do you teach now?
3. Full stop after students
4. present simple not continuous. No the before Georgian
5. Here I think you want something like: In addition, I am studying on a teacher training program. I want to apply for your course (or whatever it is) because I want to.....
6. you need an before MA
7. you need something like: an MA in American Studies from ________ University in Romania.
8. this word is too vague. Something like my teaching philosophy includes a wide range of ideas...
9. avoid this phrase!! Use something like ultimately/ my ultimate dream....
10. their level
11. maybe - improve their level of English and increase their motivation when learning a new language
12. maybe - spending time in the USA will help me to discover new knowledge that can help with my future development as a teacher and this program could change my life.
13. When I go back to my country....
good luck!
I am an English Teacher in the Republic of Georgia. I 1. was teaching high school students and currently 2, I am teaching school students, 3 Besides this, I 4 am tutoring The Georgian language via Skype. 5_____ I am studying _____ teacher training program as well, but why? Because I want to improve my teaching skills and become more and more successful in a teaching career. I have a BA in English philology and 6____ MA in American in studies 7 ___________ in Romania. My teaching philosophy is 8. wide and it includes potential growth for children education in Georgia. 9. Frankly speaking, I want to help Georgian students to increase 10. the level of English knowledge and become more motivated 11. to learn a new language, I want really to go in the USA I would say it is my American dream to improve myself there. The USA is a country where you can 12 get the knowledge of training and future development, This program will give me life-changing moment in my life. 13. Back to my country, I will do my best to share my experience with Georgians.
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