Diary entry 1
I went to Glasgow to see my boyfriend.
It was the first time for me to visit there and the city Glasgow warmly welcomed me with strong wind and rain.
Compared to Edinburgh where I live now, the city is good for shopping but not suitable for sightseeing.
As he has just moved to the new flat recently, we went shopping and purchased many stuff such as towels and mattress.
Although I wanted to stay his house longer, I had to study for the next week lecture so left his house quite early.
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Diary entry 1
I went to Glasgow to see my boyfriend.It was the first time for me to visit there and the city Glasgow warmly welcomed me with strong wind and rain.
Compared to Edinburgh where I live now, the city is good for shopping but not suitable for sightseeing.
As he has just moved to the new flat recently, we went shopping and purchased many stuff such as towels and mattress.
Although I wanted to stay his house longer, I had to study for the next week lecture so left his house quite early.
NOTE: I HAVE MADE A FEW ALTERATIONS BUT THE ORIGINAL HAS BEEN NICELY WRITTEN!
Diary entry 1
I went to Glasgow to see my significant other.
It was my first time in Glasgow and I was greeted with strong winds and heavy rain.
Compared to Edinburgh where I am based now, the city is a must for shopping but nothing to write home about when it comes to sightseeing.
As he has just moved to the new flat recently, we went shopping and purchased many things such as towels and a mattress.
Although I wanted to stay at his house longer, I had to study for the next week’s llecture so left his house quite early.
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