I am Proud to be Muslim   [yellow = corrections / blue = suggested improvements]

Being a muslim is such an incredible thing I've ever had*. I don't know how to put it into words but exactly it feels so amazing. I cried a lot to my God, and I don't know whether it was tears of joy or a real sadness. I totally believe in my God that He will never abandon** me, He will never bring me into a bad situation as long as I'm following His path. Some people think that being a muslim is full of harshness, too strict, and so on.. but for me, those thoughts are come from those who are far away from their true path. I felt this only about 3 months ago when I went back to Allah (my God), I mean when I repented. Yeah***, it was a pure feeling. that joy, those tears, those words that I said to God have changed my life. I just wanted to say that I'm so in love with Allah and can not wait to meet Him in Heaven. I wish you guys also would come back to Him, repent, prostrate, and ponder that He's very close to us. Alhamdulillah**** for everything. All praise is due to Allah

*This would be better as "such an incredible thing" or "the most incredible thing I've ever had" - either one is fine, but you can't mix the two

**I'm not sure exactly what you mean but I don't think it's "waste". You could use "give up on me" or "abandon me" or "forget me" or "forsake me" (this last one is very quite in english but it is used a lot in (Christian) religious texts so it might fit well with what you are saying...?

***=This is very informal and would usually only be used in dialogue. "Yes" would be more correct, but if you want to keep it like this it's not wrong.

****=Hey, this is cheating! You can't write in Arabic!  :D

Well done! I usually only correct texts by portguese speakers but this caught my eye and I see you have five corrections and none of them is very helpful so I thought I'd have a go. I hope it helps. Keep up the good work! I'm also glad to hear your religion is making you happy. Although I don't share it, we all need something that makes us happy in life and it's good that you've found yours.

Being a muslim is such an incredible thing I've ever been through . I don't know how words can describe  but exactly it feels so amazing. I cried a lot to my God weather it was tears of joy or a real sadness. I totally believe in my God that he will never waste me, He will never cause me into  something bad as long as I'm holding his path. Some people think that being a muslim is full of harshment, too strict, and so on.. but for me, those thoughts are come from those who are far away from their true path. I felt this only about 3 months ago when i was back to Allah (my God), i mean when i repented. Yeah,, it was my pure feeling. those joyful, those tears, those words that i said to God had changed my life. I just wanted to say that I'm so in love with Allah and can not wait to meet him in Heaven. I wish you guys also will be back to him, repent, prostrate, and ponder that he's very close to us. Alhamdulallah for everything. All praise is due to Allah

Being a muslim is such an incredible thing I've ever been through . I don't know how words can describe  but exactly it feels so amazing. I cried a lot to my God weather it was tears of joy or a real sadness. I totally believe in my God that he will never waste me, He will never cause me into  something bad as long as I'm holding his path. Some people think that being a muslim is full of harshment, too strict, and so on.. but for me, those thoughts are come from those who are far away from their true path. I felt this only about 3 months ago when i was back to Allah (my God), i mean when i repented. Yeah,, it was my pure feeling. those joyful, those tears, those words that i said to God had changed my life. I just wanted to say that I'm so in love with Allah and can not wait to meet him in Heaven. I wish you guys also will be back to him, repent, prostrate, and ponder that he's very close to us. Alhamdulallah for everything. All praise is due to Allah