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My new iPhone This morning I lost my new iPhone which was a birthday gift from my parents last week. I thought it should be left on the bus. I made a phone call to my iPhone when I arrived office, but no one answer. And I made a next phone call to the bus terminal to ask the bus driver for my phone's whereabouts.The driver told me there was nothing at all on his bus. I told the whole situation to my colleague, and she comforted me not to worry about my phone, which will be back soon. 5 minutes later, my mom called me that my phone was found by a neighbor, who made a phone call to my dad that the phone dropped in the elevator. God bless! What a good guy he is.I am very thankful for his honesty. Dear all, I need your corrections & suggestions. Thanks a lot.

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My new iPhone

This morning I lost my new iPhone which was a birthday gift from my parents last week. I thought it should be must have been left on the bus. I made a phone call to called my  iPhone when I arrived at the office, but no one answered. And I also made a next phone call to called the bus terminal to ask the bus driver for my phone's whereabouts.The driver told me there was nothing at all on his bus.
I told the whole situation to my colleague, and she comforted told me not to worry about my phone, which will be back soon.
5 minutes later, my mom called and told me that my phone was had been found by a neighbor, who made a phone call to called my dad to tell him that the phone had been dropped in the elevator.
God bless! What a good guy he is.I am very thankful for his honesty.

Dear all,
I need your corrections & suggestions.
Thanks a lot.

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