Sod's law
Hi, I'm John!
I have caught in the rain today.
It had started with two-three drops but after moment i felt really tropical rain.
Florida reminded for me where i live now.
In a 30 seconds i was dripping wet.
The rain is over as soon as i sat in car. Now i will put the umbrella in my car.
Thank you for reading!
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Hi Evgenii
I hope you find my corrections useful. I wasn't sure what you meant in the sentence about Florida. Did you mean that this event happened in Florida, or that it happened where you live but reminded you of when you had been to Florida in the past? My correction gives the second meaning.
Ellie.
Sod's law
Hi, I'm John!I have got caught in the rain today.
It had started with two or three drops but after a moment I felt really tropical rain.
Where I live now reminded me of Florida reminded for me where i live now.
In a 30 seconds i was dripping wet.
The rain was is over as soon as I got into the sat in car. From now on, Now I will leave an put the umbrella in my car.
Thank you for reading!
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Sod's law
Hi, I'm John!I was caught in the rain today.
It had started with two-three drops but after a moment it felt like tropical rain.
Florida reminded for me of where I live now.
In a 30 seconds I was dripping wet.
The rain was over as soon as I sat in the car. Now I will put the umbrella in my car.
Thank you for reading!
(I would suggest two to three)
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